Alternate Paragraph

I read your comments, and, I agree, there is a bit too much detail near the end. Here is an alternative second-to-last paragrph. Please let me know if it doesn't "flow" with the piece.

And while that greyhound lay crumpled on the ground, Hyde sat upon the throne of the world, watching other life fall before his feet. Fire danced in his evil eyes, and their taunting flames licked the bodies of the massacred life that lay buried beneath his throne.